So, I'm so slack, don't post much ever.
My darling boyfriend recently, accidentally, identified what the issue I was having with my writing was. I was never satisfied with it, and did not know why.
In the middle of a random conversation, he had mentioned that this era of literature has a very casual, breezy style.
That's my problem.
I've only ever read books from this era (Until recently), and so my writing style mimics that. I hate it.
I want to write in a more formal manner, like Poe, Lovecraft, and the like. So, I'm going to have to work on that. A lot of reading in my future, and from that, hopefully much better writing. :)
Thanks f